[help] Completed review of some pages

8 files changed, 61 insertions, 45 deletions

diff --git a/help/C/accounts-window.page b/help/C/accounts-window.page
index f2803227..f5def209 100644
--- a/help/C/accounts-window.page
+++ b/help/C/accounts-window.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
       type="guide"
       id="accounts-window">
 
@@ -8,7 +9,9 @@
     <link type="topic" xref="disable-account"/>
     <link type="topic" xref="remove-account"/>
     <desc>Add, modify, and delete accounts.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-26" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-26" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm@gnome.org</email>
diff --git a/help/C/add-account.page b/help/C/add-account.page
index 99a6d35d..2979626d 100644
--- a/help/C/add-account.page
+++ b/help/C/add-account.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="add-account">
 
@@ -8,7 +9,9 @@
     <desc>Add a new account to <app>Empathy</app>.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-24" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-27" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
index 2b7e8c35..2ca71c2e 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-join-pwd.page
@@ -1,12 +1,15 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="irc-join-pwd">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallrd.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task nocando"
+      id="irc-join-pwd">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="irc-join-room"/>
     <desc><app>Empathy</app> does not currently support password-protected IRC chat rooms.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-07" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-07" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-join-room.page b/help/C/irc-join-room.page
index 53fe3bd7..f87cf54d 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-join-room.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-join-room.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallrd.org/experimental/"
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="irc-join-room">
 
@@ -6,7 +7,9 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage"/>
     <desc>Join an IRC channel.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-07-26" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-manage.page b/help/C/irc-manage.page
index b35f12d3..9d9d6999 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-manage.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-manage.page
@@ -1,14 +1,16 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="guide"
-  style="2column"
-  id="irc-manage">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="guide" style="2column"
+      id="irc-manage">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#text-conv"/>
     <desc>How to use IRC with <app>Empathy</app>.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-07-25" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-27" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -20,15 +22,20 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Use IRC</title>
+  <title>Internet Relay Chat (IRC)</title>
 
   <section id="manage" style="2column">
-    <title>IRC rooms and conversations</title>
+    <info>
+      <title type="link">IRC Chat Rooms and Conversations</title>
+    </info>
+    <title>Chat Rooms and Conversations</title>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="problems" style="2column">
-    <title>Fix common problems</title>
+  <section id="problems">
+    <info>
+      <title type="link">Common IRC Problems</title>
+    </info>
+    <title>Common Problems</title>
   </section>
 
-
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-nick-password.page b/help/C/irc-nick-password.page
index 90f9ff3e..1a41aa5d 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-nick-password.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-nick-password.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="irc-nick-password">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task nocando"
+      id="irc-nick-password">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage"/>
@@ -8,7 +9,9 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="account-irc"/>
     <desc>Protect your nickname to prevent other IRC users from using it.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-07-26" status="draft"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-10" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-sending-file.page b/help/C/irc-send-file.page
index 242fbeab..030ddf57 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-sending-file.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-send-file.page
@@ -1,12 +1,15 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="irc-send-file">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallrd.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task nocando"
+      id="irc-send-file">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="send-file"/>
     <desc><app>Empathy</app> does not currently support sending files using IRC.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-start-conversation.page b/help/C/irc-start-conversation.page
index 0f73bdad..44dfa191 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-start-conversation.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-start-conversation.page
@@ -1,11 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-  type="topic"
-  id="irc-start-conversation">
+      xmlns:e="http://projectmallrd.org/experimental/"
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="irc-start-conversation">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage"/>
     <desc>Start a conversation witn an IRC contact.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+      <e:review by="shaunm@gnome.org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
+    </revision>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo@ubuntu.com</email>
@@ -17,36 +20,24 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Start a conversation</title>
+  <title>Chat with somebody on IRC.</title>
+
+  <p>You can hold private conversations with other IRC users, outside of the
+  public IRC chat rooms.  To start a conversation with another IRC user:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>
-        To start a private conversation with one of the IRC contacts that
-         are in a room, after you joined a room, from the IRC room contact list perform
-         one of the following:
-      </p>
-      <list>
-        <item>
-          <p>
-            Double-click the name of contact you want to have a conversation with.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-        <item>
-          <p>
-            Right-click on the name of the contact you want to have a conversation with,
-             and select <gui>Chat</gui>.
-          </p>
-        </item>
-      </list>
+      <p>In the contact list for an IRC chat room, double click the name of
+      the user you want to chat with.  Alternatively, right click the name
+      of the user and select <gui>Chat</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <list>
     <item>
       <p>
-        The IRC room contact list is not the same as <app>Empathy</app> <gui>Contact List</gui>,
-         and is relative only to the IRC room you joined. Different rooms can have different
+        The IRC room contact list is not the same as <app>Empathy</app> contact list.  It contains
+        a list of users in the IRC chat room you joined.  Different rooms can have different
          contacts listed.
       </p>
     </item>